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Starting today I’m kicking off a write-in campaign to get Jason Siegel cast in a biopic as Kurt Vonnegut. Look at the similarity. Who’s with me?
After three years and 400 pages, I have finally finished writing the first draft of a novel. Now I'm collecting all kinds of advice about writing and editing. Do you have some? I also like books, science fiction, and many other things.
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Holding her father’s shotgun in her tiny hand, Ethyl advances on the target. Her baby brother Paul carries her, piggy-back style. Ethyl wears a floral-print sundress and no shoes. Her lithe school-girl legs press against Paul’s ribbed undershirt.
Shotgun holding hand tiny her father, target baby Ethyl advances on. Brother carries, Paul piggy-back her style. Floral-print Ethyl no shoes wears lithe school-girl legs Paul’s press ribbed against undershirt.
Father’s tiny hand holds her shotgun, target baby Ethyl on advances. Brother carries, Paul piggy-backs her style. Floral-print Ethyl wears lithe school-girl legs. Paul’s ribs press against his undershirt.
Father’s tiny hand holds her shotgun. Baby Ethyl advances on her target. Brother Paul carries her style on piggy-back. Floral-print Ethyl wears lithe school-girl legs. Paul’s ribs press against his undershirt.
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